Thursday, January 15, 2009

Sharpy Feather


Sharpy Feather

You crept in my bed
this morning, light and
 full of love.

Snuggled under
around and in
the rumpled downy fluff.

You startled,
and giggled, and
pulled from your head
soft poky stuff.

"Look mommy,
a sharpy feather,"
you held out your hand
in awe.

Gently, you breathed
life into the down . . .
up, up, it swirled,
and all around

it floated, hung . . .
and hovered in our fondness . . .
slowly turning and
twisting toward the ground.

Attempting to
seize the downy gift,
Your quickness
launched it 
up and around again.

Up it swirled . . .
and then . . .
gently down . . . 
the upward gift
settled slowly and
nestled in between our love. 

3 comments:

  1. That is awesome!

    I love this:
    Gently, you breathed
    life into the down . . .
    up, up, it swirled,
    and all around

    Very cool effect with the pun on "down"

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  2. Seriously! I can't believe you actually had a picture to go with it!

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  3. I love your poem - This version especially. Is this the one you turned in? I see you and Will so clearly here and feel the love.

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